Have any questions or comments? Use this form to contact me at any time. Feel free to use the prompts below if you have feedback on a book:

Story Structure & Pacing

• Did the story feel complete? If not, why?
• Was it satisfying or did you feel cheated? Why?
• At what points, if any, did the story seem to move too slowly?
• At what points, if any, did the story seem rushed?
• At what points, if any, did you feel confused or jarred?
• What questions, if any, did you feel were not resolved by the end?

Emotional & Reader Impact

• Which parts moved you emotionally?
• Which parts, if any, made you chuckle?
• What age range do you think the book appeals to?

Character & Perspective

• Did it the story come across as being told in the voice of the POV character—from his perspective?
• Did the chosen Point of View work? If not, why?
• Did you feel the main character had changed by the end of the story, improved his attitude, etc?
• Which characters, if any, seemed too cardboard?

Worldbuilding & Believability

• Did the story seem plausible? Any points that seemed too unbelievable?
• Was there too much cliché?

Writing Style & Craft

• How was the dialogue? Did it flow? Was it clear who was speaking? Did the characters have their own unique voices?
• How was the description?
• Was there too little or too much description?

Presentation & Format

• What did you think of the cover? Did it suit the story/audience?
• What did you think of the font, font size and layout?
• Did you read the physical book, ebook, or listen to the audio?
• What did you think of the narrator’s voice in the audio version?